Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Episode 7: Brian Stood Up

After the cute guy left with his lesbian friend, Brian looked at his watch. Tommy was an hour late.

Why does this always happen to me? Brian wondered.

Tommy had looked cute on his dating profile. As they talked, a couple red flags went off though. He still lived with his ex-boyfriend. And still spoke very highly of him. And the two have had an on and off relationship. And only been split up a couple weeks.

In spite of the red flags, Brian decided he would still meet him and give him a fair chance.

"A lot of good its done for me though!" Brian muttered.

"Haven't you been here long enough?" the homophobic waitress asked, placing his coffee down in front of him.

"Are you wanting a zero tip, or does being rude actually get you good tips?" Brian asked.

"I figured I blew the tip with my comments earlier," the waitress responded.

"No, I am not like that," Brian replied, placing a 10% tip on the table, "But I will be calling your manager in the morning."

Glancing out the window, Brian saw Tommy walk by, arm in arm with another guy.

1 comment:

  1. Hello everyone! The author here. I wanted to apologize for the long delay in continuing the story. A LOT has happened in my personal life. I may try to get one or two more episodes today, then try to do an episode every few days.

    To keep me on track, there is a very simple way to keep me motivated to write these stories. That is simply to comment on each episode. Tell me whether you liked it or not. Ask me any questions that you need clarification on. And tell me your predictions! If I like your idea better than where I was going, I may incorporate it (no guarantees though!). Comment, comment, and comment some more!

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I would love your comments on this episode! Did you love it, or hate it? Why? Whats your predictions about where it will go from here? I love to hear all!